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class=\"num\">3<\/span>\uae4c\ub2ed\uacfc \ubb38\uc81c \uc0dd\uac01\ud558\uae30<\/a>\n  <a class=\"step-link\" href=\"#step4\"><span class=\"num\">4<\/span>\ub0b4 \uc0dd\uac01 \uae00\ub85c \uc4f0\uae30<\/a>\n  <div class=\"complete-guide\"><h4>\ud83c\udfc6 \ud559\uc2b5 \uc644\ub8cc \uc870\uac74<\/h4><p>\u2713 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ub2e8\uacc4\ub97c \uc644\ub8cc\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p><p>\u2713 \ucd5c\uc885 \uae00\uc744 120\uc790 \uc774\uc0c1 \uc501\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p><p>\u2713 \uc758\uacac\uacfc \uae4c\ub2ed\uc744 \ud3ec\ud568\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p><\/div>\n<\/nav>\n<div class=\"content\">\n<section class=\"lesson\" id=\"step1\">\n  <div class=\"lesson-head\"><div class=\"lesson-no\">1<\/div><div><h2>\uc608\uc2dc \uae00\uc744 \uc77d\uace0 \uc758\uacac\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc774\uc5b4\uc9c0\ub294\uc9c0 \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uc138\uc694.<\/h2><p class=\"desc\">\ub098\uc758 \uc758\uacac, \uadf8\ub807\uac8c \uc0dd\uac01\ud558\ub294 \uae4c\ub2ed, \uc608\uc0c1\ub418\ub294 \ubb38\uc81c, \ud574\uacb0 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\uc218 \uc788\ub2e4.<\/span>\n      <span class=\"blue\">\uadf8\ub7f4 \ub550 \ub2e4\ub978 \ud1a0\ud551\uc744 \ucd94\uac00\ud558\uba74 \ub41c\ub2e4.<\/span>\n    <\/p>\n  <\/div>\n  <div class=\"teacher-tip\"><div class=\"pencil\">\u270f\ufe0f<\/div><p>\uc608\uc2dc \uae00\ucc98\ub7fc \uc758\uacac\uc744 \uba3c\uc800 \ub9d0\ud55c \ub4a4 \uae4c\ub2ed, \uc608\uc0c1\ub418\ub294 \ubb38\uc81c, \ud574\uacb0 \ubc29\ubc95\uc744 \ucc28\ub840\ub300\ub85c \uc815\ub9ac\ud558\uba74 \uc0dd\uac01\uc744 \ub354 \ubd84\uba85\ud558\uac8c \uc804\ub2ec\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p><\/div>\n  <div id=\"fb1\" class=\"feedback\" aria-live=\"polite\"><\/div>\n  <div id=\"ans1\" class=\"answer-reveal\" hidden>\uae00\uc758 \ud750\ub984\uc740 <strong>\ub098\uc758 \uc758\uacac \u2192 \uadf8\ub807\uac8c \uc0dd\uac01\ud558\ub294 \uae4c\ub2ed \u2192 \uc608\uc0c1\ub418\ub294 \ubb38\uc81c \u2192 \ud574\uacb0 \ubc29\ubc95<\/strong>\uc758 \uc21c\uc11c\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/div>\n  <div class=\"toolbar\"><button type=\"button\" class=\"btn btn-light\" id=\"step1HintBtn\">\ud78c\ud2b8 \ubcf4\uae30<\/button><button type=\"button\" class=\"btn btn-primary\" id=\"step1CompleteBtn\">\ub0b4\uc6a9 \uc774\ud574 \uc644\ub8cc<\/button><\/div>\n<\/section>\n<section class=\"lesson\" id=\"step2\">\n  <div class=\"lesson-head\"><div class=\"lesson-no\">2<\/div><div><h2>\ub77c\uba74\uc5d0 \uacc4\ub780\uc744 \ub123\ub294 \uac83\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc758\uacac\uc744 \uc815\ud574 \ubcf4\uc138\uc694.<\/h2><p class=\"desc\">\ub450 \uac00\uc9c0 \uc758\uacac \uac00\uc6b4\ub370 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc0dd\uac01\uacfc \ub354 \uac00\uae4c\uc6b4 \uc758\uacac\uc744 \uc120\ud0dd\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p><\/div><\/div>\n  <div class=\"choice-grid\">\n    <label class=\"choice-card\" id=\"choiceYes\"><input type=\"radio\" name=\"opinion\" value=\"\ub123\uae30\"><div class=\"choice-icon\">\ud83e\udd5a<\/div><h3>\ub77c\uba74\uc5d0 \uacc4\ub780\uc744 \ub123\uc5b4\uc57c \ud55c\ub2e4.<\/h3><p>\uacc4\ub780\uc744 \ub123\uc73c\uba74 \uc601\uc591\uc774 \ub354\ud574\uc9c0\uace0, \uad6d\ubb3c\uc774 \ubd80\ub4dc\ub7ec\uc6cc\uc9c0\uba70 \ub4e0\ub4e0\ud558\uac8c \uba39\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p><\/label>\n    <label class=\"choice-card\" id=\"choiceNo\"><input type=\"radio\" name=\"opinion\" value=\"\uc548\ub123\uae30\"><div class=\"choice-icon\">\ud83c\udf5c<\/div><h3>\ub77c\uba74\uc5d0 \uacc4\ub780\uc740 \ub123\uc9c0 \ub9d0\uc544\uc57c \ud55c\ub2e4.<\/h3><p>\ub77c\uba74 \ubcf8\ub798\uc758 \uad6d\ubb3c \ub9db\uc744 \uadf8\ub300\ub85c \uc990\uae38 \uc218 \uc788\uace0, \uacc4\ub780\uc744 \uc2eb\uc5b4\ud558\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub3c4 \ud3b8\ud558\uac8c \uba39\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p><\/label>\n  <\/div>\n  <div style=\"margin-top:18px\"><textarea id=\"opinionReason\" placeholder=\"\uc120\ud0dd\ud55c \uc758\uacac\uc744 \ud55c \ubb38\uc7a5\uc73c\ub85c \uc4f0\uace0, \uadf8\ub807\uac8c \uc0dd\uac01\ud558\ub294 \uae4c\ub2ed\uc744 60\uc790 \uc774\uc0c1 \uc368 \ubcf4\uc138\uc694.\"><\/textarea><div class=\"char-info\"><span id=\"reasonCount\">0\uc790<\/span><\/div><\/div>\n  <div id=\"fb2\" class=\"feedback\" aria-live=\"polite\"><\/div><div id=\"ans2\" class=\"answer-reveal\" hidden><\/div>\n  <div class=\"toolbar\"><button type=\"button\" class=\"btn btn-primary\" id=\"step2CheckBtn\">\uc758\uacac \ud655\uc778<\/button><\/div>\n<\/section>\n<section class=\"lesson\" id=\"step3\">\n  <div class=\"lesson-head\"><div class=\"lesson-no\">3<\/div><div><h2>\uce5c\uad6c\uc758 \uae00\uc744 \ucc38\uace0\ud558\uc5ec \ub098\uc758 \uae4c\ub2ed\uacfc \uc608\uc0c1\ub418\ub294 \ubb38\uc81c\ub97c \uc815\ub9ac\ud574 \ubcf4\uc138\uc694.<\/h2><p class=\"desc\">\ud55c\ucabd\uc758 \uc7a5\uc810\ub9cc \uc4f0\uc9c0 \uc54a\uace0, \uc0dd\uae38 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ubb38\uc81c\uc640 \ud574\uacb0 \ubc29\ubc95\ub3c4 \ud568\uaed8 \uc0dd\uac01\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p><\/div><\/div>\n  <div class=\"thought-grid\">\n    <div class=\"thought-card\"><h3>\u2460 \uadf8\ub807\uac8c \uc0dd\uac01\ud558\ub294 \uae4c\ub2ed<\/h3><textarea id=\"whyText\" placeholder=\"\uc608: \uacc4\ub780\uc744 \ub123\uc73c\uba74 \ub2e8\ubc31\uc9c8\uc744 \ubcf4\ucda9\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uace0 \uad6d\ubb3c\uc774 \ub354 \ubd80\ub4dc\ub7ec\uc6cc\uc9d1\ub2c8\ub2e4.\"><\/textarea><\/div>\n    <div class=\"thought-card\"><h3>\u2461 \uadf8\ub807\uac8c \ud588\uc744 \ub54c \uc0dd\uae38 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ubb38\uc81c<\/h3><textarea id=\"problemText\" placeholder=\"\uc608: \uacc4\ub780 \ub178\ub978\uc790\uac00 \ud130\uc9c0\uba74 \uad6d\ubb3c \ub9db\uc774 \ub2ec\ub77c\uc9c8 \uc218 \uc788\uace0, \uacc4\ub780\uc744 \uc2eb\uc5b4\ud558\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc740 \uba39\uae30 \ubd88\ud3b8\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.\"><\/textarea><\/div>\n    <div class=\"thought-card\"><h3>\u2462 \ubb38\uc81c\ub97c \ud574\uacb0\ud558\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95<\/h3><textarea id=\"solutionText\" placeholder=\"\uc608: \uacc4\ub780\uc744 \ub530\ub85c \uc775\ud788\uac70\ub098 \uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub9cc \uacc4\ub780\uc744 \ub123\uc5b4 \uba39\ub3c4\ub85d \ud558\uba74 \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4.\"><\/textarea><\/div>\n    <div class=\"thought-card\"><h3>\u2463 \uc0c1\ub300 \uc758\uacac\ub3c4 \uc774\ud574\ud574 \ubcf4\uae30<\/h3><textarea id=\"otherText\" placeholder=\"\uc608: \uacc4\ub780\uc744 \ub123\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc73c\uba74 \ub77c\uba74 \ubcf8\ub798\uc758 \uc9c4\ud55c \uad6d\ubb3c \ub9db\uc744 \uadf8\ub300\ub85c \uc990\uae38 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.\"><\/textarea><\/div>\n  <\/div>\n  <div id=\"fb3\" class=\"feedback\" aria-live=\"polite\"><\/div>\n  <div id=\"ans3\" class=\"answer-reveal\" hidden><strong>\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><br>\uae4c\ub2ed: \uacc4\ub780\uc744 \ub123\uc73c\uba74 \uc601\uc591\uc744 \ubcf4\ucda9\ud558\uace0 \ub4e0\ub4e0\ud558\uac8c \uba39\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<br>\ubb38\uc81c: \ub178\ub978\uc790\uac00 \ud130\uc9c0\uba74 \uad6d\ubb3c \ub9db\uc774 \ub2ec\ub77c\uc9c0\uac70\ub098 \uacc4\ub780\uc744 \uc2eb\uc5b4\ud558\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc774 \ubd88\ud3b8\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<br>\ud574\uacb0 \ubc29\ubc95: \uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub9cc \uacc4\ub780\uc744 \ub123\uac70\ub098 \uacc4\ub780\uc744 \ub530\ub85c \uc775\ud799\ub2c8\ub2e4.<br>\uc0c1\ub300 \uc758\uacac \uc774\ud574: \uacc4\ub780\uc744 \ub123\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc73c\uba74 \ub77c\uba74 \ubcf8\ub798\uc758 \ub9db\uc744 \uc990\uae38 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/div>\n  <div class=\"toolbar\"><button type=\"button\" class=\"btn btn-light\" id=\"step3ExampleBtn\">\uc608\uc2dc \ub2f5\uc548 \ubcf4\uae30<\/button><button type=\"button\" class=\"btn btn-primary\" id=\"step3CheckBtn\">\uc0dd\uac01 \uc815\ub9ac \uc644\ub8cc<\/button><\/div>\n<\/section>\n<section class=\"lesson\" id=\"step4\">\n  <div class=\"lesson-head\"><div class=\"lesson-no\">4<\/div><div><h2>\ub77c\uba74\uc5d0 \uacc4\ub780\uc744 \ub123\ub294 \uac83\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc0dd\uac01\uc744 \ud55c \ud3b8\uc758 \uae00\ub85c \uc644\uc131\ud574 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